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Journal Entry: Thu Nov 12, 2009, 5:17 PM



So, for those of you who don't know, I'm doing NaNoWriMo again this year, hence my abruptly dodgy and occasional posting of late. That being said, here is my gripe.

I'll be the first to admit that I often get far too attached to my characters... and it has happened once again.

My original intent for my Male Love Interest character was for him to turn around and stab the main character in the back after she has grown to trust, rely on, and even love said character. Unfortunately, at some point during the course of the 51 pages I have written thus far, I too fell in love with the male-love-interest.

And now I'm stuck. I keep writing scenes and saying things like "the man holding the gun to her head" instead of just saying "Peter" (the name of the love interest) because I'm finding it really difficult to bring myself to make Peter betray her. For Nano purposes using vague descriptions like that would seem perfect, i mean, its alot more words than the name Peter. But for the purposes of actually getting *past* the point I'm currently at in my book, its horrid.

I need to figure out who is betraying her, is it her lover as I originally intended? Is it her shady dodgy boss (too ovious)? Is it the dude who's brother's body she dumped in the river (too random)? There's lots of options... but the one that seems like it will have the most dramatic effect is definitly the lover.

Hrm. Frustrated. Thoughts?

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Thanks for the views and faves. Have a great weekend!

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A big thank-you for the views and faves!

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Hi, Thanks for your :+fav: on Broken Down [link]

I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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thanks for the fav, kate. :)

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thanks for the :+fav: on the trip leading up to down, my dear


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