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                                                         Passion;
                                                      A centrifuge
                                            Spinning my boiling blood
                                                   Into something
                                                        Corrupt.
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*ZexyPineCones Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Passion should be dangerous... :)
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:iconultimateoutlaw:
Dangerous, frightening, disconcerting.... and delicious. Yep.
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*ZexyPineCones Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Good, as long as we agree. :) I'd like to see you doing more in this form.
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:iconultimateoutlaw:
Yes master, if it pleases you.
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*ZexyPineCones Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmm...I like the sound of that. :)
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:iconultimateoutlaw:
I wrote another one, just for you. :heart:
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*ZexyPineCones Mar 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Going to look now. :)
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`nycterent Mar 2, 2009  Professional Writer
I remember this - I saw it last night when browsing newest submissions. Rictameter is a delicious form. Are you going to develop it into the nine-line form or leave it like this? Either way, expressive piece! Centrifuge, boiling blood, yeek!
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I haven't really decided yet, actually. It was late, I was tired, this is as far as I got. I am notorious for messing with things after the fact though, so i wouldn't be surprised. And thanks for the comment! :)
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`nycterent Mar 2, 2009  Professional Writer
Very welcome and good luck with this if you do decide to do something to it! =]
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