I remember this - I saw it last night when browsing newest submissions. Rictameter is a delicious form. Are you going to develop it into the nine-line form or leave it like this? Either way, expressive piece! Centrifuge, boiling blood, yeek!
I haven't really decided yet, actually. It was late, I was tired, this is as far as I got. I am notorious for messing with things after the fact though, so i wouldn't be surprised. And thanks for the comment!