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Galloping roundabout down the mountain,
Bareback on that stallion you would give
No name because to name something is to
Own it and you never believed in possessions;

But lover, listen, once you called me your
Sun and moon and the ripples in your river.
You gave me many names and when you
Left you couldn’t just take them away.

You were more cut-throat than I’d imagined;

But listen, gunslinger, I'm not dead yet.
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`thetaoofchaos Jul 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
now it's on! love that last line.
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~Underground-Rogue Jul 5, 2009  Student Writer
Very western-style. Loved the sentiment behind it, loved the words you used to express it. Really awesome piece^^
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:iconmistakenmagic:
Loved the second stanza especially. And hell poetry is the best way to bitch because generally you get away with more when it's articulate and ';poetic' lol Great job!

Erin xxx
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*ZexyPineCones Jul 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I like the way you bitch and moan. :) :) :) :)
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Bareback on that stallion you would give
No name because to name something is to
Own it and you never believed in possessions;


i really enjoyed this all.
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~Omnius666 Jul 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Liked it
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=kersee9 Jul 1, 2009  Professional Writer
this is awesome, i love every line! :heart:
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But lover, listen, once you called me your
Sun and moon and the ripples in your river.
You gave me many names

Absolutly wonderfull:clap:
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:iconyouinventedme:
love the flow of the first stanza,
though the second is my favorite.

the close brings to mind Stephen King,
because I am a nerd.
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