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It has been made quite evident, what your
        intentions are.

You would tie me to your stake.
You would leave me here to burn.


        I see them rather plainly
        every time  you cock your head to the left
        like that and smile—

   off-kilter like, you know?
                              sort of
Left of center.
  

You are

         A little shy of carcinogenic.
         A little less than copacetic.
         A little arrhythmic arrhythmia

that makes my heart beat faster. All
         out of sync.


         You make  me worry a bit,
         about the future.

         About my reproductive organs.

I also worry for you. Might be you've bitten
off more than you can chew, love.


         I respect our differences.  

         Mine is a slow venom. A warm and
         not unpleasant death.


         Yes. Your
         roar is deafening.
         Alright. Your
         teeth are sharp.

But fire,

love,

fire I can handle.
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
`thetaoofchaos Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i like the raging elemental energy in this one. ;)
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:iconchadwood:
~chadwood Nov 15, 2010   Writer
Love the back and forth style and the ending - great ending.
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:iconultimateoutlaw:
:heart: Thank you. It was kind of an impulse write, but I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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:iconalapip:
*alapip Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
another,
in a long line
of others,
tending,
or attaining,
excellence,
mindbending -
mainlining
defiance.

your venue.

continue.

:)pip
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:iconultimateoutlaw:
:heart:

It was actually more like blowing off steam than attempting a real work of quality lol. Glad you enjoyed it though :)
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:iconnewsbulletin:
(Can I just used the same comment again..? :P )
I really love how you've structured this
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:iconultimateoutlaw:
I only seem to use that kind of wacked out structure when I'm pissed off. It is odd lol.
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:iconeveryberry:
Mood: Amazed ~Everyberry Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:faint: ...Is all I can say.

"But fire,
love,
fire I can handle."

THAT.
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Nov 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I see... hmmm. Aptly titled. :)
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